Class was interesting last Tuesday. Robert and I presented our quotes to the class. Robert's presentation was pretty inspirational. It made me really reflect on my life. Therefore, I needed to revise my essay and make it better than his. I'm just kidding. I presented mine, and it was pretty alright.
The topic of today's class was pretty interesting. We were learning about subject and treatment. This made me analyze most sentences I read since then. Analyzing the subject and treatment (or I learned as predicate back in middle school) for all sentences. It was both fun and interesting, in a book-smart sort of way.
I'll post another blog before the weekend, soon. So stay posted. (Pretty boring blog though).
I must agree with what your saying I also like the subject and treatment too, but it is also good to use catchy sentences to harness your reader's attention.
ReplyDeleteExsample: (1)The car was very nice.
(2)The combustion from the V-12 gave
the ominus presence of danger to
the other drivers.
I like sentence number two a lot better. It does sound burlier.
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