Sunday, September 27, 2009

All Stages of the Writing Process


Hi Dr Rivera and my classmates! I hope everyone had a great weekend! This is my second blog for this week.

On Thursday' s class, we didn't have to meet face-to-face in the classroom. We met online and discussed about Student Demonstration of All Stages of the Writing Process.

Our textbook showed us Vera Harries who returned to college while she still had a full-time job as a hairdresser wrote a paragraph about "Customers Are Like Canines". Although she knew her topic rather well, she worked with some prewriting techniques that allowed her to get her ideas flowing onto paper. Vera's paragraph had clear topic sentence, four strong supports, and a brilliant concluding sentence. She moved her paragraph from an idea to a topic sentence to an outline to a paragraph. All Stages of the Writing Process made her paragraph more professional^_^



I hope everyone has a great weekend and see you all in class next week.

-Hai, Zhan(Odin)

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  1. mnriveraSeptember 27, 2009 at 5:34 AM

    Odin,

    I'm glad that you enjoyed the writing activity last Thursday. There's no doubt that all stages of the writing process are necessary in order to write an effective essay. I encourage you to continue to use the strategies you've gained, so that you can increase your writing skills.

    Best regards,
    Dr. Rivera

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  2. OdinSeptember 28, 2009 at 5:33 AM

    Thank you~Dr. Rivera. I will continue to use all stages of the writing process to make my essay better. I hope you have a great week.

    Best regards,
    Odin

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